The feed back that I got from my crit was that I needed more line variation and to improve the two faces in the first panel. These are areas that I can improve before the winter break so I will work to add more line variation and to improve the two faces. I think also it was hard to see line variation in my final piece because it wasn't a3 it was a2, so once I print it a3 I think it will be easier to see these details. 

My overall thoughts about the final piece is that I am really happy with it. It was my first time doing a final piece digitally and printing it and is something that I will defiantly continue in the future. One thing I will improve when it comes to digital work is that when I printed it out I noticed some dots of color that weren't supposed to be where they were so in the future I will do a test print so try and catch those mistakes.